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Starting with real footage

Great start! Using real footage right at the beginning is almost a must in this niche, especially since, as we’ve seen, you’re dealing with passionate Lion King fans. Of course, this comes with copyright risks, so make sure to only show it for a few seconds or add video effects to avoid issues. I’ll go into more detail about this in the 'How to Create Your Video' section.

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Giving them what they click for

'If you've watched The Lion Guard, you've probably wondered: Why was Kion missing from The Lion King 2?'

Starting the script with a sentence like this after the clip showing real footage is a very smart move. The title already sets up curiosity, as this audience will be clicking to find out why Kion wasn’t in The Lion King 2. On top of that, mentioning 'if you’ve watched The Lion Guard' is a brilliant touch because most viewers of this video are likely fans who have probably seen it, so that will create a sense of recognition. By addressing the question they already have in their minds and giving them confirmation, they’re definitely hooking this audience.

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00:10

Triggering sound effect

I’m not saying your editor has to use this specific sound effect, but I do want to point out that using sound effects in general is often a great idea. When I watched this intro, it definitely caught my attention because it disrupted the flow of the video in an interesting way. Adding this kind of effect every now and then can wake up the viewer, grab their attention, and help pull them deeper into the story.

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00:13

Thrilling background music

I like the feeling they’re trying to create here. Using this kind of thrilling background music can help draw the viewer deeper into the story, keeping them engaged for longer. It builds up the suspense, and I think this vibe works really well with the topics they’ve chosen.

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1:22

Trigger your audience

'Well for that, we need to go to the point where Kion defeats Scars Evil spirit in the Lion Guard.'

Highlighting the value the viewer is looking for, but first telling them to pay attention to this part before they get the answer, is a very smart strategy. It keeps the viewer’s curiosity and attention high because, in other words, you’re telling them the answer is coming later. While they’re watching, they know in the back of their mind that something important is still on its way. It’s a clever trick that I would definitely recommend using in your script!

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2:05

Nice hook

'But unfortunately, Kion wasn't the only one that got hurt during this battle...'

Great hook! They're giving the viewer enough reason here to continue watching the video, and this definitely one I'd use in my own videos. Some other example hooks you could use as well:

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• But if you thought this was it, you're wrong...

• But what happened next left everyone shocked...

• And that’s when things got even crazier...

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3:43

Speaking the same language as your audience

These are questions the viewer might already have in their mind, so if you ask me, it’s definitely a good idea to mention them alongside a thrilling sound effect. This way, you literally grab the viewer’s attention, especially if they’re starting to lose focus on the story, as the sudden shift in tone brings them back into the video.

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5:22

Personal opinion

I really like how they make the script feel personal. This approach helps build a recognizable brand on YouTube and increases the chances that viewers will return for more videos. To achieve this, it’s best to find a scriptwriter who has a genuine passion for The Lion King or to use AI capable of writing in a more personal and relatable style. I personally prefer videos where it feels like the narrator is just speaking casually from their room. It makes everything feel more real, like there’s an actual person with their own opinions behind the screen. Great script!